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    AND WITH
    this sword embedded in the night
    This sword of Virtue, casting light, on evils realm.
    And in its hilt there wilt be found,
    a power thy will shall unbound,
    and through its fortune overwhelm -

    - the furies in their cages wake,
    and all the victims they will take,
    and hoard deep in the underground.
    Until the darkness burns away,
    then all the wretches in bright day,
    wilt drown.........
     
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    Oblivion Cry (inspired by Shroud of the Avatars blood river massacre – its a song of regret from a soldier who partook in the attempted genocyde of Elvenkind at Blood River)


    The burning floodpan,
    carries the stench of death
    You can see the sun,
    winking 'through the Blacktoft hills
    Shadows crawl,
    along dismembered flesh
    And stagnant pools stand timelessly still

    So steal the infants from their cots
    Smash their bodies on the rocks,
    where the blood-red river runs,
    beneath the pale phantasmal sun
    I've a got premonition,
    something Machiavellian has begun
    ah – ha -ha -ha -ha (morbid laughter morphs into sobbing)

    Thunder rumbles,
    through the windswept valley
    Lightning strikes the hills endlessly
    It can't be – it can't be real!
    Round up the innocent and young
    And I've got an intuition,
    something Lucefarian has begun
    And I wish the whole would,
    would be engulfed by the sun!
    And I've a got premonition,
    something Machiavellian has begun.........
     
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    Should i actually write part 2 of Pork Pigginski adventure? :,p

    For all 2 of my audience lol
     
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    SHELL ISLE

    Feel the fire of Veramacors breath,
    spitting rocks + molten embers
    A lair of all-consuming death,
    to whence the valiant adventurers

    Feel the cold of the Stygian blackness
    Hope + light- beyond thy reach
    A maze untrammelled in its vastness,
    and majestic waters-deep

    And hear the hearts of companions pounding
    Ballista's shriek and belfries ring
    The catcalls of Mongbats resounding,
    in the thundering of wings


    Then feel the pulse of the world grow weaker
    The crust has grown so very thin
    And seek the Codex out truth-seeker,
    beyond the all-protective twins


    Then come the ravage of Age of Darkness
    See the savage in his home
    Beyond an endless sea of sadness,
    stands Shell-isle all alone.........
     
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    Sword 2

    ...and with this sword embedded in the night
    This sword of Virtue,
    wrought in light
    in darkness bound.
    Long for sought,
    yet never found,
    but by the one it calls,
    and hounds.
    On Sabbath shall it be unbound,
    and through its fortune overwhelm,
    and evil drown.
     
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    I've only been able to write when I do it for the sheer enjoyment of the creative work.... reading and listening is rare... just having one person in this world who is willing to really listen to you is a great gift.

    And I will bug you again to eventually put this writing into books in New Britannia! Please! :)
     
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    Vyrin, I've been noticing threads ripping apart Shrouds dialogue. I haven't seen it yet, but i get the impression it needs to be rewritten. What are your thoughts good sir?
     
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    REMEMBER BRITANNIA

    SHOULD THE VALKYRIE RECLINE INTO DARKNESS
    THE SUN WILL STILL BURN EVER-BRIGHT
    GOLDEN LIGHT WILL SHINE UPON THE CLOUDED THRESHOLD OF DAWN

    AND SHOULD THE TITANS EVER GROW TIRED OF WAITING
    I CAN MAKE THE AGES FLY
    'TILL THE STARS ARE WASHED AWAY AND FOREVER IS ONE DAY

    REMEMBER BRIANNIA - OLINDA
    THERE WAS ONCE A BETTER TIME
    MOUNTAIN WATER - SWEET AS WINE
    FRUIT PLUCKED FRESH FROM EDENS VINE
    LUSH-GREEN VALLEYS LOST IN TIME
    LOST IN TIME

    THE SORROWS ONCE FLOWED LIKE WATER
    THE SONGS OF THE PAST SHALL LIVE AGAIN
    WHEN WE LEARN TO LOVE EACH OTHER
    IN A WORLD WHERE GOODNESS NEVER ENDS

    BUT SHOULD THE DARKNESS START TO FALL ON THE HEAVENS
    ANGELS WILL ASSAULT THE NIGHT
    THEN THE BLACKNESS COWER BACK FROM THEIR ASTRIFEROUS LIGHT

    SO REMEMBER BRIANNIA - OLINDA
    THERE WAS ONCE A BETTER TIME
    MOUNTAIN WATER - SWEET AS WINE
    FRUIT PLUCKED FRESH FROM HEAVENS VINE
    IN LUSH-GREEN VALLEYS LOST IN TIME
    LOST IN TIME



    alternate version...


    MARKET GARDENS

    HOW DO YOU SET A DULL MOOD ON FIRE?
    ASSEMBLE STARS TO LIGHT MY NIGHT?
    AS MY FANTASIES UNWIND WITH SUCH WILD, FLAMING DESIRE

    COME CLOSE AND HEAR MY HEART - FIERCELY BEATING,
    WHEN I'M SWIMMING IN YOUR SCENT
    SO CLOSE I CAN FEEL YOUR BREATH AND THE GENTLEST CARESS

    SHOULD DARKNESS EVER FALL ON OUR HEAVEN
    I'LL RENOUNCE INFERNAL NIGHT
    AND RESTORE THE SUMMER LIGHT TO YOUR COLD AND DREARY LIFE

    I WAS ONCE ENTRHALLED AND DREAMING
    YOUTH – A PHASE THAT PASSED UNNOTICED
    THERE MUST BE SOME HIDDEN REASON
    WHY THE PROMISES WERE BROKEN?

    SHOULD DARKNESS EVER FALL ON OUR HEAVEN
    I'LL RENOUNCE INFERNAL NIGHT
    AND RESTORE THE SUMMER LIGHT TO YOUR COLD AND DREARY LIFE

    REMEMBER THE SUNNY MARKET GARDENS
    THERE WAS ONCE A BETTER TIME
    MOUNTAIN WATERS – SWEET AS WINE
    CONSUMING PASSIONS ON THE VINE
    AND THE BANNERS WOULD UNWIND
    AND WE IN KIND.........


    alt ver.


    Hymn of a Solemn Lord

    Should the Valkyrie transgress – into darkness,
    I – will consecrate the light
    'till the Maidens frolic on the golden threshold of dawn

    And should the Titans ever be - desecrated,
    I – will sanctify their shrine,
    brightly Virtues ever-shine to the burning edge of time

    But should the darkness dare to fall - on our Heaven
    I – will insurrect the night,
    call a champion to fight with contrition for the light

    But I wont be macerated
    The Phoenix shall surely resurrect
    How many aeons have we waited?
    How many eternities are left?

    But should the tyranny inhabit – the darkness,
    I'll – commemorate the light,
    call an Avatar to fight the final reserves of night

    We'll awake to an age of good-fortune
    Prosperity and bounty for all – abound
    In a vision over mystic waters
    Where the dreams of man are found

    Remember thy Sovereign, companions
    There was once a better time
    Mountain water – sweet as wine
    Fruit plucked fresh from Edens vine
    'Till the very end of time...
    of time...
    of time...



    alt ver.

    Should the Arch-Angels forsake - God and Heaven
    I'll endear to you a light,
    to expel the black of night,
    from a truly righteous soul

    Should the Titans start to fade – from the Ether
    I can bring them back again,
    and replenish their lost youth,
    revive Love, Courage and Truth


    Remember Britannia – Olinda
    There was once a better time
    Mountain water – sweet as wine
    Blessed valleys lost in time,
    lost in time

    And should the darkness start to fall – on the Heavens
    I'll assemble the starlight,
    to annihilate the night in bright astriferous light

    Should the Titans ever grow – tired of waiting
    I can make the ages fly,
    faster than the speed of light
    Time would end before our sight

    Oh, should the Arch-Angels decline – into darkness
    I will resurrect the light,
    'till again they tread upon the sunlit threshold of dawn

    Remember Britannia – Olinda
    There was once a better time
    Mountain water – sweet as wine
    Blessed valleys lost in time,
    lost in time



    BATLINS OBSESSION

    Ev- ery night I search,
    for an Eden
    Pa - radise beyond my sight
    Always vanishing in night
    Always fading in the light


    I – was just a choir boy,
    when I saw her
    She – a tempestuous child
    That my heart went running wild
    And all myst - ry and beguile


    So -lemly she would sing,
    in the vestry
    Hair – flowing in moonlight
    Like a waterfall of night
    How I trembled at the sight


    Its such that no mind can process
    All the promises we've broken
    Sometimes love can not be spoken
    Sometimes it must be awoken


    Should – blasphemes twist all reason,
    and meaning
    I – would strip the lands threadbare
    I would wrestle any foe
    Tussle, jostle to-and-fro


    Would – she think me a beast?
    Or a demon?
    To - put candour before sense
    Am I cursed or am I blessed?
    Till I find her – I wont rest


    Should – darkness ever fall,
    on her Eden
    I – will consecrate the light
    And I'll disavow the night
    With a Menorah so bright


    Ev- ery night I search,
    for a Heaven
    Pa - radise beyond my sight
    Always vanishing in night
    Always fading in the light.........

     
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    I did several posts on the "paths" of the main story line. The response was encouraging, they are working on them. I fear there are not enough people testing them, looking through the dialogue for confusion and inconsistencies. I had hoped that there would have been more chances to provide feedback earlier, but the paths weren't implemented to any great extent before persistence. But here we are, it's water under the bridge and down to the wire for release. All we can do is encourage people to test and provide feedback. Whether the narrative will live up to expectations set originally is a big question, especially since Shroud now proclaims itself primarily as a sandbox MMO.
     
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    Thanks Vyrin
     
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    Im sitting here thinking about a new lyric - because I'm stuck in a place where in don't know everyone - but they all know each other lol fk my life... So, hail Britannia...
     
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    'untitled'

    ANVIL OF PASSION - RADIATE WITH VIRTUES FLAME
    MYSTERIES UNBOUND MYSTERIES
    A SENTIENT BEING ASCENDS IN GRACE

    SPIRITS - SPEED THROUGH BLACKNESS
    YEARNING FOR MORNINGS GLORY,
    BEHIND A VENERABLE SHROUD

    UNLOCKING WONDER
    GREATNESS AND UNITY
    PRESCRIBED IN HOLY VOLUMES,
    BURIED BENEATH A SANCTIFIED TOMB

    THERE LIES A TEMPLE IN A SECRET LAND
    WHERE VIRTUES BURN IN THE HEART OF MAN
    BEYOND THE NIGHT,
    'YOND THE DAY,
    'YOND THE TWILIGHT AND CLIFFS AND STRAITS
    BILLOWING WINDS CARRY WAVES AND THEN SILENTLY ABATE

    A HOLY CHOIR TREMBLES IN THE CHANTRY HALL
    SINGING A SONG OF TIMES BEFORE 'THE FALL'
    ARISING FROM PEWS IN A SOFT-GLOWING MENORAH-LIGHT
    THE CRASH OF THE WAVES ON THE COAST ECHOING OUTSIDE

    THERE LIES A TEMPLE IN A SECRET LAND
    WHERE VIRTUES BURN IN THE HEART OF MAN
    BEYOND THE NIGHT,
    'YOND THE DAY,
    'YOND THE TWILIGHT AND CITY GATES
    BILLOWING WINDS CARRY WAVES FOR THE GODS WHOM THEY OBEY.........

     
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    “ALT LYRICS...”

    THE FOLLY OF MAN, WE SHAMELESSLY EXPLOIT
    EXACTINGLY PLOTTING, DEPLOYING DECOYS
    PERVERTING THE LOWEST DENOMINATION
    THE DISDAINED KOWTOW IN CHAINS
    THEN AT MIDNIGHT- WE SHALL FEAST ON MANS REMAINS

    THE BODY OF MAN WAS ONCE HOLY AND WORSHIPPED
    A TEMPLE OF FLESH WE DEFILED AND WROUGHT
    THE SOUL- WE ENTOMBED IN UNENDING ADDICTION
    AND VERY SOON, WHEN DARKNESS BLOOMS
    MANKIND WILL BE JETTISONED AND UNMOORED

    THE VIRTUES OF MAN WERE SO EASILY FOILED
    FOR WE WE ARE THE MASTERS, UNBURDENED BY CHAINS
    THEY LABOUR IN FIELDS FOR A PITTANCE AND SHELTER
    IN SUN OR RAIN AND RACKED WITH PAIN
    MAN SO BELIEVED THAT HE COULD END TYRANNY'S REIGN

    OH, WE'LL BLOT OUT THE STARS AND EMBODY THE DARKNESS
    FOR WE ARE THE SHEPHERDS THAT GATHER THE FLOCK
    AND WITH ALL OF OUR WEALTH WE EMPOWER OUR CHILDREN
    THEY'LL PAY THE PRICE, PLUCK OUR THEIR EYES
    SILENCE THE CRIES AND TURN UP THE FURNACE FLAMES

    WITH VAST SUMS OF WEALTH WE'LL PAY NO RESTITUTION
    NO OLD INSTITUTIONS CAN STAND IN OUR WAY
    WE'LL REWRITE THE PAST TO MAKE OUR FOIBLES GLISTEN
    WHEN YOU HAVE CHOICE YOU CAN REJOICE
    AS WE VANQUISH THE DAY TO ENDLESS NIGHT.........
     
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    THIS UNHOLY CANDIDATE STANDS BEFORE US
    HER TENDRILS- PROBING- INTO OUR WORLD
    A FLAG AS PURELY BLACK AS SHE
    MUST NEVER, EVER BE UNFURLED
    HER SKIN, OF WHITEST ALIBASTER
    HAIR, AS DRY AS SUN-BLANCHED BONE
    THE LIGHT- HER HIDDEN DEN AND HARBOUR
    THE NIGHT- HER SECRET LAIR AND HOME
    HEAR THE CRIES OF INFIRMITY AS THE LAST DAYS COME
    FEEL THE FIRE OF ECSTASY AND OF NIGHT SLAIN YOUNG
    I'M AT THE END OF THE WASTELAND, DROWNED IN DUST
    BUT LIFE HAS NO MEANING IN THE HEAT-CRACKED CRUST
    AND I CAN FEEL THE HOT SUN POURING ON THROUGH
    BUT THERE'S NOTHING TO HOLD, TO HOLD ONTO
    THERE'S NO HOLY GRAIL IN THE COMPACTED BONE
    AND NO WIND TO CARRY ME, CARRY ME HOME
    AND WE REALLY DON'T HAVE MANY ANNIHILATIONS, THESE DAYS
    WE SHOULD HAVE THEM MORE OFTEN TO DARKEN THE PLACE
    ALL THE CLOCKS WILL STOP TONIGHT
    THERE'LL BE NO TIME LEFT AT ALL
    NO ASCENSION OF THE LIGHT
    NO REDEMPTION WHEN YOU FALL
    NOW I'M SINKING IN THE SEA OF THE NIGHT
    IN AN ENDLESS BLACK HOLE
    THERE BEATS A HEART OF DARKNESS DEEP BENEATH MY MORTAL FLESH
    THE ONLY GOD I WORSHP IS THE ANGEL OF DEATH
    I'M LYING IN MORASS DOWN IN A STYGIAN LAIR
    THE TORCHLIGHTS SLOWLY DYING IN THE STIFLING AIR
    AT LAST I'VE FOUND WHAT I SEEK!
    LET THE ANNIHILATION COMMENCE!
    LET THE ANNIHILATION COMMENCE!
     
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    THERE ART POWERS AT WORK OF WHICH THOU KNOW'TH NOT
    THERE ART PLATITUDES LOST TO THE CONSUMMATE NIGHT
    AND UNHOLY SANCTIONS WHICH PLAN AND PLOT,
    TO STEAL THE WORLDS BEYOND THY SIGHT


    [Hypnotic overlapping chant]
    Nihilists scream
    (Nihilists scream)
    In a pantomime of blood
    (In a pantomime of blood)
    And the skull of the Avatar
    (And the skull of the Avatar)
    Is sinking in the mud
    (Sinking in the mud)

    The thrashing wings of cannibal angels,
    shred the night and beat the land
    The flesh of man is their desire
    Cursed be the fooled and damned
     
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    Ammaj Song

    Long ago lived an intellectual insect named Ammaj
    Who made alts to troll and destroy
    But because he has the intellect of a banana
    We saw right through his little ploy......

    ;)
     
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    Coming soon
     
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    Launch is looming...again

    I already know how the story ends. No doubts at all.
     
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