Crowdsourced Music Final Submission Thread

Discussion in 'The Bards of Poets' Circle' started by FireLotus, Jul 16, 2014.

  1. Lord British

    Lord British Lord British SOTA Developer

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    Santa / Peter,
    Another fine track from you you.
    I can "feel" the satyr's furled brow as they push the Fawns around.
    - LB Approved!
     
  2. Lord British

    Lord British Lord British SOTA Developer

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    Richard,
    Love the piece, love the melody!
    Approved, but I have 1 request.
    In each phrase, please take the instrument playing the lead melody up a bit in loudness.
    I often feel that the drum or base piano notes are louder than the melody.
    0:00 - The Hand organ / orcharina
    0:36 - I think its a picked guitar just above the harpsichord playing the lead, again, I vote for a bit louder.
    1:02 - I hear what I am guessing is an oboe playing a lead, this one os even more quiet than the previous, I would bring it forward a lot.
    1:51 - This "reprise" I think can be as you wish.

    - LB Approved! (With mods please)
     
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    Lord British Lord British SOTA Developer

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    Santa / Pete,
    Lovely, lovely piece!
    Its so sad these pleasant fawns are so mistreated isn't it?
    LB Approved.
     
  4. Lord British

    Lord British Lord British SOTA Developer

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    Holt,
    Thanks for sticking with this and perfecting it.
    This is spot on.
    LB Approved!
     
  5. Lord British

    Lord British Lord British SOTA Developer

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    Wondrous Bards and Poets,
    Hail unto thee, I say!
    Yet more fine music thou hast created for the good people of New Britannia.
    They will be pleased no doubt.
    I am much more than pleased to say the least.

    Thank you.
    - Lord British
     
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    Tavern, Travel, Filler piece "Yo Ho Hum, I Really Need Some Rum" with mods requested from Lord British. Awaiting Portalarium approval.

    Thanks for the feedback. I brought up the melody at the beginning and throughout the track. I also doubled the accordion part at the beginning with the harpsichord to give some presence to the attack. Slight lowering of the bass in the piano. Picked guitar melody has been brought out. The bassoon at 1:02 is more centered and louder. Let me know if you need anything else for this one.

     
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    Tavern, Travel, Filler piece "Volga Sea Shanty" awaiting Portalarium approval.

    Softened harpsichord sound slightly to help blend in the mix.

     
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    Tavern / Travel / Filler song "Old Mines", awaiting Portalarium approval approved by Lord British!

     
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    Tavern, Travel, Filler Piece, "Smelly Sewers," awaiting Portalarium approval.

     
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  13. Lord British2

    Lord British2 RichardGarriott

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    LB Approved: Davy Jones Aint got no bones! I like it! And so does Davy! I am sure.
     
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  14. Lord British2

    Lord British2 RichardGarriott

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    LB Approved! Thanks Richard. Yo Ho Hum! I really need some rum!
     
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  15. Lord British2

    Lord British2 RichardGarriott

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    LB Approved: Love it! Has exactly the hardened and soulful feel I hopped! Thanks!
     
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  16. Lord British2

    Lord British2 RichardGarriott

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    LB Approved: Very pleasant ditty, exactly what will make modest industrious honest and honorable merchants banking feel quietly comfortable.
     
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    Lord British2 RichardGarriott

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    LB Approved: VERY Nice feel! Can't wait to deploy this in some of the dark underground areas of Novia!
     
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    Lord British2 RichardGarriott

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    LB Approved: Very nice! Almost too nice for those smelly sewers! :)
     
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    Lord British2 RichardGarriott

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    Holt, GREAT work. Thanks for standing by this one! Great to have the triad coming together so nicely!
     
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  20. Lord British2

    Lord British2 RichardGarriott

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    Greetings great bards!
    So sorry it took me so long to circle back on these.
    As always your work is fantastic!

    I am greatly pleased and honored for these to be in the game.
    We will get them in right away!
    - Lord British / aka Richard Garriott
     
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