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Isle of Storms chat window text

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  1. Kara Brae

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    Title: Isle of Storms chat window text
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    Details: When you first arrive at the Isle of Storms the chat window text says. "Whatever brought you here did so as a ghost...". This sentence doesn't mean that you are a ghost, but that whatever transported you to the Isle of Storms is a ghost.

    That sentence doesn't add anything to the explanation and can be completely removed - then the text would read:
    "You appear in a strange new place...You are without form, though you can move..."
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    OS: Windows 10 (10.0.0) 64bit
    CPU: Intel(R) Core(TM) i7-3770 CPU @ 3.40GHz (8) System RAM: 16324
    GPU: NVIDIA GeForce GT 640 GPU RAM: 3020
    SotA.EarlyAccess.Win.64.372.Date.07.15.16
    Area: IsleOfStorms
    Loc: (48.0, 17.9, 28.4)
     
    Kara Brae, Jul 16, 2016
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  2. jiirc

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    I had a similar interpretation of the text. However I like the part about being brought here by a 'Whatever'. It just seems to create this atmosphere of unknowing and impending doom. But the line could be written to be clearer that something brought you here and you appear in ghost form.
     
    jiirc, Jul 16, 2016
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  3. Lum the Mad

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    Thanks, will address this
     
    Lum the Mad, Jul 16, 2016
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