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Poorly constructed "tip" sentence

Discussion in 'Release 40 Dev+ Bug Forum' started by Mishikal, Mar 27, 2017.

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  1. Mishikal

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    On the loading screen, this sentence sometimes appears:

    "Chaos magic is both the most difficult to learn but also the most difficult to resist!"

    Now, perhaps one is trying to make utter chaos out of the English language, but I'm guessing that was not the intent. ;)

    This would more properly read:
    "Chaos magic is both the most difficult to learn and the most difficult to resist!"

    Or even better:

    "Chaos magic is the most difficult to learn and the most difficult to resist!"
     
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    Thanks, Fowarded for review 29/3/2017
     
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