The shuttered eye

One quick note for feedback, because I haven't finished the scene.

I love the green banner, and having taken a closer look in first person view, I can see some attempt was made to counter what I am about to criticize, but I don't think it is enough.

From a distance, they look like website banner logos, almost perfectly straight and starkly contrasting, while everything in the area is decrepit and decayed.

Please do another pass at this... dirty it up somewhat, perhaps tatter the banners more so they look less perfect.
That's all for now

 

Ok... nevermind my initial misgivings... I have finished going through the tower, and some of the newness of the banners can be excused, but it needs to still not stab my eyes. There has to be a happy medium between the visual appeal and being more in keeping with the surrounding atmosphere.

Edit: change of phrase.

 

Agree 100% I know I mentioned this exact thing to Richard and Starr at SotaCon... they said it's on the list of things to "fix" up visually, let's hope it makes it in game eventually. The neon banners not only show up there, but in other scenes and it's definitely visually jarring in more than a few of them...