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Typos in Anais Conversation on Isle of Storms[combined]

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  1. Bedawyn

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    Posted by: @Bedawyn

    05/04/2019 17:44
    Title: Typos in Anais Conversation on Isle of Storms
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    (a) The conversation begins with:
    You have been given a description of Anais.

    But you haven't been given a description of her (not that you need one anyway).

    (b) After one of the premature-NPC closures, I had to re-open the conversation. After re-opening, she says:
    It's obvious to me that the Oracle, didn't tell you everything you need to know.

    Misplaced (unneeded) comma after Oracle.

    (c) At the jump column, she says:
    This place where I'm going to teach you a few things.

    Sentence fragment. I assume she means "This place is where..." or "Here's where..." or something to that effect.

    (d) In response to the "mess" keyword, she says:
    Or, um. never?

    Should be either: "Or, um, never?" or "Or, um. Never?"

    (e) In response to the "job" keyword", she says:
    helping you as a job. ...It's certainly a lot of work!

    Should be: "job (period) (ellipsis) (space) It's certainly..."
    If it's going to use an ellipsis at all. It really isn't necessary here, and Anais' dialogue throughout really overuses the ellipses (and I say that as someone who tends to overuse them myself).

    (f) In her "thanks" response after giving you the potion of health, she says:
    you should should drag it into your--uh,oh!

    Duplicate "shoulds"

    (g) After killing the flying watcher, she says:
    I shall award these a small amount of gold.

    "thee" instead of "these"

    (h) Later in the same paragraph, she says
    we'll walk about skills and combat decks!

    "talk" instead of "walk"

    (i) The line
    You received an item (Simple Staff) from Anais
    is missing its period.


    Steps to Reproduce: Talk to the "Mischievous Child" on the Isle of Storms

    User Specs:
    OS: Windows 10 (10.0.0) 64bit
    CPU: Intel(R) Core(TM) i3-8130U CPU @ 2.20GHz (4) System RAM: 8089
    GPU: Intel(R) UHD Graphics 620 GPU RAM: 2150
    SotA.Win.64.966.Date.05.03.19
    Area: IsleOfStorms/Begin
    Area Display Name: Isle of Storms
    Loc: (-13.2, 25.2, 12.9)
    Debug: SXNsZU9mU3Rvcm1zfEJlZ2lufCgtMTMuMTU5LCAyNS4xNTQsIDEyLjg4NSl8KDAsIC0wLjExMiwgMCwgMC45OTQpfDcwNi4wODE0fC02LjUyMzQ2Nnwz

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    Posted by @Merrik

    05/12/2019 14:37

    Title: Typo in Anais Dialog

    User Specs:
    OS: Windows 10 (10.0.0) 64bit
    CPU: Intel(R) Core(TM) i7-4790K CPU @ 4.00GHz (8) System RAM: 16266
    GPU: NVIDIA GeForce GTX 1080 GPU RAM: 8079
    SotA.Win.64.970.Date.05.10.19
    Area: IsleOfStorms/Begin
    Area Display Name: Isle of Storms
    Loc: (-252.4, 32.0, -123.6)
    Debug: SXNsZU9mU3Rvcm1zfEJlZ2lufCgtMjUyLjM1OSwgMzEuOTg5LCAtMTIzLjYzMyl8KDAsIDAuOTk1LCAwLCAwLjEwMyl8MTUzLjQ2OTN8MjAuODg4MDF8NS43NTEzMTE=

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    Posted by: @Echondas

    When talking to Anais about combat - after using the keyword "I understand" she says:
    ... fight the watcher until its destroyed ...
    should be
    ... fight the watcher until it's destroyed ...
     
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    I left my character standing beside Anais and the rift while I typed all that. When I returned to the game, the chat window showed her saying "Use the rowboat to return to the Isle of Storms." Not only am I still on the Isle of Storms, but that must be a pretty impressive rowboat to travel through space! It's even got a cloaking device, since there's no rowboat to be seen.
     
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    Just created my first character and am getting fairly irritated at all the messed up spelling and poor sentence structure in a game crafted by developers that speak English. And I am only at the beginning talking to Anais.

    I expect broken English and misspelled wording from Korean games, Russian games, etc. I started watching this game and its progress around 2015. Finding it tough to believe no one has fixed simple spelling mistakes, double word usage problems, and poor sentence structure problems. C'mon man! Little things like this make a big impression on people. Fix the easy stuff in the NPC dialogue.
     
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    Bzzt. 3 relevant bug reports identified. *shined a red laser scanner over thread*

    Avatar reports combined for easier reference.

    *[SEABREEZE]: Connection terminated*
     
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    Thanks for the report! Issue #64874
     
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